中国家公务员考试生在写雅思作文时最难学会与最难提高的部分无疑是论证思路部分。好的论证不止是一篇作文字数的体现，更是逻辑思维的体现。下面记者对你说雅思写作discussion如何写，大伙一块儿看看吧!
雅思写作discussion如何写：
1、缘由：
缘由论证是写作中最常见的论证办法，可以通过写一个现象是什么原因来承接中心句，一般放在第一层逻辑衔接中用比较多。
常用连接词：
…because/since/as…
…due to sth
常用句式：
1. This is largely/partly due to…,
…, which is largely/partly due to… 这主要/部分是因为什么。
2. The main reason for it is …N/that +完整的句子
…, the main reason for which is… 主要是什么原因什么。
3. A contributing factor is… 其中一个原因是…
4. The social / individual / technical / economic reason for thisphenomenon / problem is…。
这一现象/问题的社会/个人/技术/经济是什么原因…
E.g. Students who take a gap year off tend to be more independent. The main reason for it is that they unavoidablyencounter some difficulties and have to deal with them by themselves duringtheir first–time work or travel.
参加间隔年的学生总是更独立。这主如果因为他们在第一次的旅游或工作中不可防止地会遇见一些困难且不能不亲自去处置这类困难。
2、结果：
结果论证分为两种，第一种是指好的结果，第二种是指坏的结果，具体由中心句的内容决定。结果论证在第一层逻辑和第二层逻辑中都可以用。
常用连接词：
Consequently,
As a consequence/result,
…therefore… 因此
…, so that 一句话，以至于…
In this way/In so doing, 这么一来，…
E.g. Each team member is assigned a specific task even in teamwork andin so doing, they can also cultivate their independence.
每个团队成员都会同意一个具体的任务，这么一来，甚至在团队合作中也能培养他们的独立性。
常用句式：
…, which may result in an unpleasant/unexpected/desirable consequencethat…。
这或许会致使一个让人不悦/出人预料/理想的结果，就是…。
E.g. Some students are used to finishing learning tasks all alone, whichmay result in an unpleasant consequence that their interpersonal skillswill deteriorate.
一些学生习惯于一个人一人完成学习任务，这或许会致使一个不好的结果，他们的人际交流技能或许会变差。
雅思写作开头段写法：
开头篇
不少同学写开头都陷入了一种典型的模板化趋势，大家先来看一道2012年的考试真题：
Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town.
While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain
information from the internet at home. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
拿到这个题目，不少烤鸭笔下的开头是如此的：
Nowadays, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, whether government should establish free libraries in each town has sparked much debate. Some people think government should establish free libraries in each town , while others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.
不了解有没同学“躺枪”，写这种开头的同学，分数绝对不可能高于5.5，整个开头几乎可以说是在“自杀”，除去套模板，就是照搬原题，考官拿到这种开头是绝对不会有好印象的。 那真的好的开头是什么样子的呢?好的开头又好在什么地方呢?大家一块儿研究一篇剑8的TEST1中剑桥考官的给出的范本，先来看一下题目：
Some parents think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
考官范本的开头是如此的：
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone.
从这篇考官范本的开头，大家不难看出，它并没模式化的“社会背景引入---提出正方看法---再提出反方看法---最后陈述自己看法”，而是只作了两件事
1、给核心名词下概念。
在本文中，即是给child’s education下了个概念，谈了一下在作者看来，child’s education是哪种。
2、表明看法或立场。
在本文中，即说明孩子的教育问题不只只关乎父母。 所以，好的开头可以“无模板，但有逻辑。” 翻翻剑桥雅考虑官的范本，大家会发现不少考官在开头段都只干了两件事：下概念+ 表明看法，或者是引出背景+表明看法，甚至不少考官只干了一件事，即引出背景，仅此而已。
雅思写作个性化表达如何写：
雅思写作个性化表达一，引言段部分的个性化表达：
一个好的引言段对议论文有哪些用途不言而喻，比较常规的写法是在引言段的开始对议论文的话题作背景陈述，一般是大致介绍考试试题中所涉及的事物或行为在当今社会的总体状况或特点。这种写作方法中规中矩，但非常难表现出个性化色彩。致使不少文章一直在用“Nowadays…”、“With the development of…”等千篇一律的套句。而个性化的表达可以使文章的背景介绍与我们的亲身历程相结合，使文章变得更为鲜活，开头段便看上去独一无二，引起考官的注意。下面来看一个例子： People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest some measures to solve this problem.
个性化引言段
I keep on nodding in agreement when seeing the background information of the question. I myself have always been struggling not to be overweight. Unfortunately, like most others, I failed. As to why people nowadays are not as fit and active as they were, various factors can be identified.
雅思写作个性化表达二，主体段中的个性化表达：
主体段是比较很难进行个性化表达的部分，或者说在理由段进行个性化表达要特别注意“分寸”，由于假如理由段中的个性化表达过多，则会导致前文所说到的减少文章论据“常见实用性”和说服力的结果。那样怎么样达到个性化和说服力的平衡性呢?大家可以先看几段文字：
Tele-education has been playing an increasingly significant role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
个性化理由段-讨论telecommunication的优点
In classrooms across most parts of the developed world you will see an array of telecommunications equipment from TVs to computers. This technology allows students greater contact with the outside……I remember attending a small rural primary school, but watching the landing of people on the moon.
Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
个性化理由段-讨论interest in going to the cinema
However, the cinemas in my home country are still full every weekend and when a new film is released we are all keen to go and watch it. In fact, many small cinemas have been rebuilt and we can now go to large centres that have six or eight cinema screens and show up to ten different films a night. An evening out at the cinema is fun and some films, particularly horror and science fiction films, are much better on the big screen.
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
个性化理由段-讨论international music重要程度
However, there is one reason why international music may be more important, and that is since it is widely liked internationally, it helps unite the world. I noticed this in Korea, when I saw young Korean boys dancing in unison to modern rock music. The traditional Korean music is often too difficult, high toned and not relevant to the lives of younger people.
在第一段话种，作者结合自己童年在学校看登月直播的历程说明“tele-education”有哪些好处。在第二段话中，作者结合自己国家的电影市场状况说，说明大家还是感兴趣去电影院看电影的;在第三段话中，作者结合自己去韩国旅游的所见所闻证明了国际音乐的重要程度。可以看出，这两个主体段的原因陈述都是和个人历程相结合的，所以文章看上去非常有个性化，但却完全不失辩论力度。如此的原因段写作办法也是值得教学中让学生领会和尝试的。
一个月如何备考雅思写作：
写
要训练写雅思考试真题。雅思考试真题可以练剑桥雅思系列的。只有练了雅思考试真题才能对于雅思的出题思路和题目构成有明确完整的认知。在训练的时候应该注意应该在规定时间内完成。只有在有空闲限制的重压下写作，考生才能在考试的时候发挥自如。在训练写作的时候也未必非得要写完整的文章，有时可以进行段落论证的写作。譬如，专门花时间练一练开头段或结尾段的写作。有时把文章分解了写可以更能磨练写作方法。有时也可以专门训练某种论证手法的写作，甚至对于常见的句型可以进行造句训练。在训练频率上，基本应该维持两天写一篇以上。
读
假如只不过一味埋头苦练的话，那只能提升写作速度而在写作水平上未必会有长足的进步。只有看了好的文章，考生才会了解应该往哪一点努力与我们的文章有什么不足。非常重要的是要看考官写的例文，譬如剑桥大学出的Cambridge IELTS 2与Cambridge IELTS 3等。看的时候不要只了解就好，而要着眼于三个方面：考官范本是怎么样提出看法并进行论证的，运用了什么论证手法;范本是如何安排段落的，段落之间与句子之间是如何连接在一块的，运用了什么衔接方法;范本里有哪些精彩的词、词组和句型是值得大家模仿的。假如考生可以举一反三，仔细考虑并且适合借鉴的话，那样看一篇就会有一篇的受益。除去考官范本以外，其它的一些出色范本也可以参考。各种精彩段落，包含雅思阅读文章里面的一些论证办法和有用表达也可以成为学习的对象。
改
有时考生越看范本会越感觉郁闷甚至沮丧，由于发现我们的低水平文章和高分作文之间好像存在着不可逾越的巨大鸿沟。要想跨越这条鸿沟，弥补其中的差距，重点在多修改。考生应该自己先在规定时间内完成作文，然后对照范本，看看自己作文中存在的问题。有没审题错误?结构是不是混乱?有没表达不清的地方?然后仔细琢磨一下，范本是如何展开论证的?看数遍范本将来可以试着依据刚刚学习范本的领会和收成来修改自己原先写过的文章，把论证不够充分的地方重新论证一下，关联不当的地方修补一下，错误表达改正过来。当然，假如可以有老师的指导，成效会更好。如此，练一篇，看一篇，改一遍。写一次就会有一次的收成。
